Hard to really say... I mean, it's just another Quick-scope montage (which already over saturate Youtube). But, if you want some real criticism, I'd say work on the transition between clips a little bit, and maybe use a little less slow-down (save it for things like Triples, Collat Headshots, things like that rather than reloading).
Other than that, I really just kind of found it to be about average for what you normally see. I think if you want it to stand out, you'll need to incorporate something different. Something that tells people "This is why you should watch mine rather than the other people's.".